This is a record of my learning prior to January 2022.
Hi Connor! I really liked the idea of your story. It shows you have a good imagination. But I think you need to proof read your work and make it longer so people know more about whats going in your story. It was great reading your blog post.
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Hi Connor!
ReplyDeleteI really liked the idea of your story. It shows you have a good imagination. But I think you need to proof read your work and make it longer so people know more about whats going in your story.
It was great reading your blog post.