Connor Tuvalu Literacy 2021

 

school T2W7 - Persuasive writing - planning

 

Connor T2W7 - Persuasive writing - planning

 

writing challenge

NSW Blues Referred to as Australian sport's greatest rivalry,the State of Origin series is one of Australia's premier sporting events, attracting huge television audiences and usually selling out 

 The final two teams compete in the Grand Final. NSW has won 15 championships and Queensland has won 22 championships.n wow

Denny's is a good restaurant because it has a free free birthday meal wow it is cool they also have yummy food    

Connor Planner - Creative Writing

  Start your writing here… today was a normal day for me and my family were go for a drive along the waterfront  all of a Sudden a Tsunami appeared out of Nowhere me and my family  Were terrified And wanted to get to a safety place so we could survive we were unable to find a shelter and the Tsunami crashed into each other 50 people were injured and 4 people died me and family survive we swimming to the top of the water and were able and

magic show

On Friday the 25 of June there was a magic show here at Point England School. The magician talked about healthy eating and why we as young people need to eat vegetables and how we need to eat better food. If we change our food and eat more healthy we can stop some food poisoning, we won’t get diabetes. If we eat more cleanly we will be more active and have more energy and easier to get up and out of bed in the mornings. The magic show was a great message to all young kids and adults that attended.      

Connor WK9Creative Writing

 

pool

 on Friday i saw my class snorkelling in the pool the instructor told them to put to the flippers on but do not walk with them once. they go into the water they did some laps back and forth in the pool. hen they're blowed out the water from the snorkel and got change into the school uniform.

Immersion Assembly

 On Monday the entire school went to the Immersion Assembly in our school Hall.  Each team had an item which represented what they would be doing for this term. 

Team 1 showed an amazing video about where the sun goes at night time. 

Team 2 performed on stage about the same thing as team 1. 

Team 3 did a performance on stage about the myth Rona and the Moon. 

Team 4 Guardians of the Galaxy Point England style, and 

Team 5 talked about the main planets in our solar system. 

The Senior Management team also performed on stage about the different kinds of equipment and things you can use to find your way around the world. Mr Jacobson showed us the six-tin, Mrs Nua tried to use a Map and Mr Sommerville showed us some cool things using a GPS.

 

Connor of Planner - Creative Writing

 

The image I chose is:

My Brainstorm/Ideas

The purpose of my writing: A description, an explanation, a narrative, to persuade, a recount or a combination of different text formats

Write a maximum of 4 or 5 paragraphs to present your best writing ever! Think about how you will engage your reader - vivid vocabulary, dazzling dialogue, detailed descriptions, or a personal point of view!

Start your writing here...today me and my family went to the pools when we got There was a long line but we still got into the pools. When we got into the pool I saw a diving board i asked my mum if I could go on the diving board and she said yes. When I got to the top of the diving board I slept a slap on the water.  After the swim I went and had fish and chips for lunch. After lunch I went back on the diving board And when I got to the top I did not slept . and I jumped into the water.after the pools me and my family went home the next day. we went back to the pool because