reading

maths

This is data for how much sugar is in a fizzy drink.

Narrative

I was standing on the island of chilly bins. I had 100 cans of spaghetti in the chilly bin, 1000 coca cola in a chilly bin. I had a chilly bin on the water. My Cousin

FIX THE MISTAKES

This week in writing we had to read a story that Miss West wrote. We had to add in all the full stops and capital letters.

FIX THE MISTAKES!

WALT: use full stops and capital letters correctly in our writing.

The writing below has some missing full stops and capital letters! Can you find the mistakes?

In December last year I went on a trip to Western Australia. It was the first time i had been there since I was two years old. While I was there I had many adventures. and saw a lot of wildlife. I saw lizards, a range of birds, frogs, kangaroo, snakes, fish, quokka, and stingray.

One of the highlights of my trip was when I climbed 61 metres up a Tree to a fire lookout. There was an amazing view from the top. I could see right over the treetops and into the distance. Treetop lookouts like this one were once used to keep an eye out for bushfires.

It was 44 degrees celsius on the day I left Perth and there was a big bushfire which had started a couple of hours down the road. As a result there were thunderstorms rumbling around the city. In the plane we flew near a thunderstorm which was absolutely amazing.

After sitting on the plane for six and a half hours the plane landed in Auckland. We were told it was 21 degrees. This was 23 degrees colder than in Perth. I was cold.

We are learning how much sugar is in snacks and fizzy drinks. We are doing statistics in maths. Next time I want to get better at being a good leader.

About me

Hi My name is Connor and I am in year 5. My teacher is Miss West. My favourite thing to do is play rugby, play PS4 and eat KFC. I like playing with my cousins and riding my bike.